This is my final review. I feel that the small changes that I have made since the last draft have really set this review apart. Moving the text on the right up has improved the overall image of the text as it is now all in-line and fills out the page more. I have changed the whole image, and although it is not a direct screen grab I feel that the image creates synergy between the review and the film. The time on the watch is the exact same time that is mentioned in my film and is shown on the phone, therefore this image is almost a teaser and forebodes what is going to happen in the film at that time. I have also made the stat rating more prominent on the page by filling in the stars that it achieved and leaving the outline of the stars it did not achieve. This makes the rating section stand out much more and helps to catch the readers eye and draw them in - as looking at the rating is one of the factors that decides if you are going to read the review and further watch the film.
